Thesis Statement and Topic Sentences

Prompt: What is the most important thing that Odysseus does and why?

Thesis-
Listing: The greatest achievement of Odysseus was when he escaped from the Cyclopes, Polyphemus, because he was clever, quick thinking, and saved his crew from all being devoured.
Open-Ended: The greatest achievement of Odysseus was escaping from the Cyclopes, Polyphemus, because of many reasons.

Topic Sentences-
#1: Odysseus is known for his clever thinking, which he proves his brilliance when he creates a plan for escaping Polyphemus.
#2: Odysseus had to be quick thinking when Polyphemus interrogated him with questions and started to eat his men.
#3: The reason Odysseus proved why this is the greatest achievement and most important thing he did on his journey home was because his mind saved his crew from all being devoured.